I didn’t see it as the story taking a turn rather the result of the demon meeting the wife of the man he supplanted and the attraction between them, I think I’d almost expected something like this frame m the last chapter. I may have even alluded to it in my comment but n that chapter. Seems perfectly logical to me given her relationship with her dead husband was a bit iffy anyway.
In my head he was going to not tell her and he and his son were going to trick them. And then just carry on as a double life. But last night - idk was just not in that kind of mood so thought I would toss some oral sex into the mix, some foreplay and come clean.
I think it worked well the fact that she accepted it and seems willing to collude with him adds a twist to the story, the question is will they tell the daughter?
I haven't decided that yet. I have a few days to think on that. I have a pro and con list in my head. Usually I plan an idea out and then my characters do the opposite soooo who knows.
Honesty just might be the best policy after all or maybe it was just the sex!
I was in an odd mood last night and the story took a turn, as you can see. Thoughts?
I didn’t see it as the story taking a turn rather the result of the demon meeting the wife of the man he supplanted and the attraction between them, I think I’d almost expected something like this frame m the last chapter. I may have even alluded to it in my comment but n that chapter. Seems perfectly logical to me given her relationship with her dead husband was a bit iffy anyway.
In my head he was going to not tell her and he and his son were going to trick them. And then just carry on as a double life. But last night - idk was just not in that kind of mood so thought I would toss some oral sex into the mix, some foreplay and come clean.
I think it worked well the fact that she accepted it and seems willing to collude with him adds a twist to the story, the question is will they tell the daughter?
I haven't decided that yet. I have a few days to think on that. I have a pro and con list in my head. Usually I plan an idea out and then my characters do the opposite soooo who knows.
I like the idea you have a plan and the characters kind of change it.