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It adds additional context to the story, although I’m not sure it’s necessary as the story stands without it but it certainly doesn’t detract.

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Since in the original I never talked about her past, do you think it would make an odd intro?

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You might need to consider tweaking the start of the first chapter slightly to tie the two together but yes I think it would be fine.

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I should prob give her bio dad a name that starts with J & K, like the series of victims - or do you think that isn’t needed?

Or maybe her adopted dad’s initials?

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